Tuesday, 7 June 2016

Bulldog Zoey



Bulldog Zoey was jumping up and down going through everyone's legs and annoying Luna. Zac,Luna and natalia were getting dressed and packing their suitcases they hoped in the car  

They went to Auckland    And they got Subway then they went to the motel they unpacked their bags  they stayed for nine nights they had so much fun they went to a museum and left Zoey at home. 

Zoey was running through their motel room and knocking over plants and spilt Natalia's favorite light baby blue nail polish all over Zac’s bed ripping Zac's pillows to pieces and she was messing the whole room up 

When everyone got back and and mad,scared,disappointed and very angry at Zoey they growled Zoe and told her to never do it again for know on Zoe had to go everywhere with them.

5 comments:

  1. Interesting story Lani. You have problem and a solution. Come and see me tomorrow and we will work on your structure and punctuation.

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  4. hi
    Lani
    your
    really
    nice

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  5. so interesting lani but add some more wow wods in

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