Tuesday, 2 August 2016

The Trap



The Trap

Once in a mystical forest there was a princess mouse named Princess Angel. She lived in a mouse kingdom all alone.She had beautiful glossy hair that had powers to grant any wish and to heal.One day a evil man called Drago who came to cut her hair to have powers to rule the world. He tied her up. He was about to cut her hair but suddenly  Prince Kyle came to the rescue.He grabbed  Drago and threw him into prison and untied the Princess she was happy and thanked him and they got married and they lived happily ever after.    By Lani Roxburgh

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6 comments:

  1. Anonymous25 August 2016 at 13:41

    AWESOME WRITING! I really like the title and all the wow words you used, Ka Pai:)

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  2. Anonymous20 October 2016 at 11:21

    Love the story Lani. I love the name angel. SO CUTE!!!

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  3. Anonymous18 November 2016 at 13:54

    amazing work Lani keep it up

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  4. Anonymous18 November 2016 at 13:56

    amazing work lani keep it up by carlos

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  5. Unknown18 November 2016 at 13:56

    thanks Eloise and Brooke really nice comments

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