Kate Sheppard
Kate Sheppard was born 10th march 1847,in Liverpool, England. She moved to New Zealand in the late 1860s and she died there on the 13th of July 1934. She was 87 when she died.
Kate Sheppard is famous for fighting for women's right to vote. Because of Kate Sheppard we were the first country for woman to vote. She is a role model to me because she is telling me to be strong and how to be a role model to my little sister and little brother.
Kate Sheppard is famous for fighting for women's right to vote. Because of Kate Sheppard we were the first country for woman to vote. She is a role model to me because she is telling me to be strong and how to be a role model to my little sister and little brother.
Kate Sheppard is on the $10 note.
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