Lani's Blog

All about me!

I am learning to write an autobiography about myself I will be successful when I can Use a plan to generate ideas for my story (Y-chart) Introduce who I am Describe what I look like, what I like to do and some interesting facts about me. Include WOW words in my writing Begin to revise and edit my work

All about me! Kia ora my name is Lani I go to mangonui school.              I have brown hair and brown eyes and I'm tanned. I look like my dad.                                                                                                                                                                                                     I hate playing soccer,cricket,tennis, and walking and running for a long time. I wish my teachers knew I'm smart,funny,fun and silly oh and good writer and good listener. I live with my mum ,big sister ,step dad 2nd house,dad ,baby brother ,baby sister  ,and step mum. The people important to me in my life are family,friend,and pets. I have five cats henry,skittles,sushi,ginger,and gray fluff and I have a dog poppy. Poppy lives with my dad and the cats with my mum I love spending time with family and friends,and I love swimming and snorkeling, and I just love family. Ko mamari te waka Ko whakaroro-raagiputa te maunga Ko awaroa te awa Ko  Te rarawa te iwi Ko Ngati huia te hapu Ko Te kotahitangi te marae Ko Ange raua ko Rocky oku matua Ko Lani toku ingoa

Two Stars and a wish I liked all the colour. I liked how when I read it just reminds me of my dads family. I wish I could do better