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Write an “I am” poem

I know I can do this when I Use the template to write my poem Write each line in full sentences        Use punctuation correctly like A . , !

I am Lani Roxburgh. I wonder about my friends. I hear Voices in the air. I see a view from my home. I want some of my friends to stop being mean. I am Kind to the world. I pretend My life is perfect. I feel Generous to the world. I touch Water as it slowly fades away. I worry About my papa in hospital. I am friendly to everyone. I understand why some of my friends are being mean   I say I'm just telling the truth about how their acting I try to make them nice again it sometimes works I hope they belive me I am glad i’m me

Two Stars and a wish I used the  template to write my poem I used punctuation and used full sentences I could use more detail

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