Write an “I am” poem

I know I can do this when I Use the template to write my poem Write each line in full sentences        Use punctuation correctly like A . , !

I am Lani Roxburgh. I wonder about my friends. I hear Voices in the air. I see a view from my home. I want some of my friends to stop being mean. I am Kind to the world. I pretend My life is perfect. I feel Generous to the world. I touch Water as it slowly fades away. I worry About my papa in hospital. I am friendly to everyone. I understand why some of my friends are being mean   I say I'm just telling the truth about how their acting I try to make them nice again it sometimes works I hope they belive me I am glad i’m me

Two Stars and a wish I used the  template to write my poem I used punctuation and used full sentences I could use more detail

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All about me!

I am learning to write an autobiography about myself I will be successful when I can Use a plan to generate ideas for my story (Y-chart) Introduce who I am Describe what I look like, what I like to do and some interesting facts about me. Include WOW words in my writing Begin to revise and edit my work

All about me! Kia ora my name is Lani I go to mangonui school.              I have brown hair and brown eyes and I'm tanned. I look like my dad.                                                                                                                                                                                                     I hate playing soccer,cricket,tennis, and walking and running for a long time. I wish my teachers knew I'm smart,funny,fun and silly oh and good writer and good listener. I live with my mum ,big sister ,step dad 2nd house,dad ,baby brother ,baby sister  ,and step mum. The people important to me in my life are family,friend,and pets. I have five cats henry,skittles,sushi,ginger,and gray fluff and I have a dog poppy. Poppy lives with my dad and the cats with my mum I love spending time with family and friends,and I love swimming and snorkeling, and I just love family. Ko mamari te waka Ko whakaroro-raagiputa te maunga Ko awaroa te awa Ko  Te rarawa te iwi Ko Ngati huia te hapu Ko Te kotahitangi te marae Ko Ange raua ko Rocky oku matua Ko Lani toku ingoa

Two Stars and a wish I liked all the colour. I liked how when I read it just reminds me of my dads family. I wish I could do better

Teah

Terrific,beautiful sister,with brownish and blond hair.

Evil at times,getting up to mischief,annoying and kicking my legs.

Always drinking coca.

Hilarious,dancing and singing by herself.

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Creative with art and makeup and more.

Dimante poem

                                                   Day

                                           shady ,bright

                             swimming,talking, fighting

                       Fun ,daydreaming,sleeptalking,Nightmares

                         Quivering,shivering,freezing

                                         Stormy,Cold

                                                Night

Car Sale

If your sick of your old car then buy this ferocious car it is faster than lightning  this car has been wanted for years and years.It hasn't been brought since so we a trying to sell it.It is 50%  off only $100. It has bullet 
prof  tyres and red smoke and flames the windows are red and awesome and eight seat's and eight food and cup holder's.8 little TV screens for every one and they can make movies and write books  and do any thing you can plug anything in it and if you buy it now you will get some money back so call now Evan if you don't then just go to the store.(:(:(:(:

The Trap

The Trap

Once in a mystical forest there was a princess mouse named Princess Angel. She lived in a mouse kingdom all alone.She had beautiful glossy hair that had powers to grant any wish and to heal.One day a evil man called Drago who came to cut her hair to have powers to rule the world. He tied her up. He was about to cut her hair but suddenly  Prince Kyle came to the rescue.He grabbed  Drago and threw him into prison and untied the Princess she was happy and thanked him and they got married and they lived happily ever after.    By Lani Roxburgh