Rapunzel my fairy tale

Once upon a time  there was a beautiful girl named Rapunzel with very,very,very,very long golden hair.she had two friends named will was a dragon and maximas was a beautiful white horse .Rapunzel's boyfriends name was Iron Man his real name is Tony Stark.Rapunzel went missing one night .Will knew where she was and who took her. It was  supergirl and Rapunzel was being held in an underground lair on mystery island or snowy mountain.will thought snowy mountain he knew supergirl would pick snowy mountain  because she knew Iron Man would pick mystery island.The three  of them got on iron mans private jet they went to snowy mountain they didn't find Rapunzel there then will remembered the underground lair but supergirl watched them arrive with all her cameras every where.supergirl made it impossible to get to Rapunzel.They got past all the traps except the hologram Rapunzel's.they had to find the real Rapunzel the told them to talk and they did but the  real Rapunzel didn't talk so they undone the chains and got out of the underground lair and Rapunzel was free and they lived happily ever after. 

Write an “I am” poem

I know I can do this when I Use the template to write my poem Write each line in full sentences        Use punctuation correctly like A . , !

I am Lani Roxburgh. I wonder about my friends. I hear Voices in the air. I see a view from my home. I want some of my friends to stop being mean. I am Kind to the world. I pretend My life is perfect. I feel Generous to the world. I touch Water as it slowly fades away. I worry About my papa in hospital. I am friendly to everyone. I understand why some of my friends are being mean   I say I'm just telling the truth about how their acting I try to make them nice again it sometimes works I hope they belive me I am glad i’m me

Two Stars and a wish I used the  template to write my poem I used punctuation and used full sentences I could use more detail

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All about me!

I am learning to write an autobiography about myself I will be successful when I can Use a plan to generate ideas for my story (Y-chart) Introduce who I am Describe what I look like, what I like to do and some interesting facts about me. Include WOW words in my writing Begin to revise and edit my work

All about me! Kia ora my name is Lani I go to mangonui school.              I have brown hair and brown eyes and I'm tanned. I look like my dad.                                                                                                                                                                                                     I hate playing soccer,cricket,tennis, and walking and running for a long time. I wish my teachers knew I'm smart,funny,fun and silly oh and good writer and good listener. I live with my mum ,big sister ,step dad 2nd house,dad ,baby brother ,baby sister  ,and step mum. The people important to me in my life are family,friend,and pets. I have five cats henry,skittles,sushi,ginger,and gray fluff and I have a dog poppy. Poppy lives with my dad and the cats with my mum I love spending time with family and friends,and I love swimming and snorkeling, and I just love family. Ko mamari te waka Ko whakaroro-raagiputa te maunga Ko awaroa te awa Ko  Te rarawa te iwi Ko Ngati huia te hapu Ko Te kotahitangi te marae Ko Ange raua ko Rocky oku matua Ko Lani toku ingoa

Two Stars and a wish I liked all the colour. I liked how when I read it just reminds me of my dads family. I wish I could do better

Teah

Terrific,beautiful sister,with brownish and blond hair.

Evil at times,getting up to mischief,annoying and kicking my legs.

Always drinking coca.

Hilarious,dancing and singing by herself.

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Creative with art and makeup and more.

Dimante poem

                                                   Day

                                           shady ,bright

                             swimming,talking, fighting

                       Fun ,daydreaming,sleeptalking,Nightmares

                         Quivering,shivering,freezing

                                         Stormy,Cold

                                                Night

Car Sale

If your sick of your old car then buy this ferocious car it is faster than lightning  this car has been wanted for years and years.It hasn't been brought since so we a trying to sell it.It is 50%  off only $100. It has bullet 
prof  tyres and red smoke and flames the windows are red and awesome and eight seat's and eight food and cup holder's.8 little TV screens for every one and they can make movies and write books  and do any thing you can plug anything in it and if you buy it now you will get some money back so call now Evan if you don't then just go to the store.(:(:(:(: